From"Hey, that's pretty good" to "Holy crap! This is awesome!"
I like how you improved it beyond just the proportions, outline and coloring technique, but also made the character's movement more dynamic and chose to show extra details like that cloth on his waist and the cannon ball he's stepping on.
youve improved a lot theres greater depth shown with the placement of your shadows on his pants and you made the scene more complex by rearranging objects, you pulled the character in ... in other words "me likey"
I have the drawing skills of a bag of cr*p, so.......
I like how you improved it beyond just the proportions, outline and coloring technique, but also made the character's movement more dynamic and chose to show extra details like that cloth on his waist and the cannon ball he's stepping on.