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Retribution 11 by Zombiesmile Retribution 11 by Zombiesmile
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last page for now.

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Original story written by :iconfyorl:

:icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:
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:iconangie-starr:
Angie-Starr Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013

I love your artwork!! It's amazing and beautiful!

 

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:iconaidra:
aidra Featured By Owner May 4, 2009
Great work, but I have one suggestion. Knights should have longer stirrups, becouse here they sit more like race riders then cross riders.

Sorry for my english ^^"
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:iconzombiesmile:
Zombiesmile Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2009  Professional
hey thanks for the advice! I honestly don't know much about riding, it just seemed to go better with the pose, but you're right. :3
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:iconskylord:
Skylord Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
... The fact you represent chainmail with straight lines is strangely fascinating.
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:iconzombiesmile:
Zombiesmile Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2009  Professional
they're actualy slightly bent one or the other way, making wave-like patterns. c: I looked up chainmail and found it the best way of drawing it.
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:iconskylord:
Skylord Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
My friend who draws a lot of medieval armior uses the same method, actually. I'm just surprised you're using it too, haha. Must be a universal thing for mail. Good thing to know. XD
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:iconyogaji:
Yogaji Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2009
Wow, the detail and depiction on the horses are just, amazing!
It has inspired me to read from page 1 and on ward!^__^
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:iconzombiesmile:
Zombiesmile Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2009  Professional
thanks for reading! ^w^
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:iconlolipopgi:
Lolipopgi Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Epic, as expected.

You two are an explosive duo!
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:iconzombiesmile:
Zombiesmile Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009  Professional
thank you very much!
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:iconkianna-chan:
Kianna-chan Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009
Oh my, another amazing page! :heart:

I love that saying the archer guy says in the last panel "Heh. Whoever's in Command's no fool. Shame he's on the wrong side." I don't know why, it's just cool. <3
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:iconzombiesmile:
Zombiesmile Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009  Professional
Certainly is cool. c:
I enjoy ~Fyorl's writing a lot.
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:iconkianna-chan:
Kianna-chan Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2009
You both make an amazing pair. One good at writing, one good at comics and when both collide! Epic things happen. c:
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:iconfyorl:
Fyorl Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I enjoy *Zombiesmile's renditions of my writing even more!

I mean damn that first panel is so cool. It really captures his character perfectly and makes his words that much more epic.

You truly are a genius when it comes to comics.
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:iconravensilver:
Ravensilver Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009
Ohhh! Retribution!

:heart:

:hug:

Love it!

Though... what's happening with C&B? ;);)

Sent you a notice and an email... ^___^
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:iconcrusader13:
Crusader13 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009
I love the armor design, mostly i see unpractical junk.
Are there more pages? Are you planing to color these? The way you color your works is awesome!
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:iconzombiesmile:
Zombiesmile Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Professional
no plans on colours, but I intend to draw it until the end (just as long as the shortstory goes).
probably around 20 pages in total.
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:iconcrusader13:
Crusader13 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009
Can't wait to see those.
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:iconmickimatsu:
MickiMatsu Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool eyes are cool..!
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:iconmad-yet-inteligent:
mad-yet-inteligent Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009
keep going!! wanna see the rest of it!! +u do have some pretty crazy drawing skills. loving the detail in places (eg hair) and the blankness in others (like their sheilds)
to much detail clutters it+to little makes it look crap. got a gd balence ^^
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:iconreallyangry:
ReallyAngry Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This doesn't make a whole lotta sense to me, should it? :slow:
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:iconzombiesmile:
Zombiesmile Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Professional
perhaps clicking "First" will bring you to page one of the stooooryyy? xD
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:iconreallyangry:
ReallyAngry Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh! There's a story? :slow:
I just wanted more arts to look at! moar sexy plz! :rage:
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:icontobogi:
Tobogi Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009
this is very good XD this style is really professinal
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:icondel-borovic:
Del-Borovic Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
This is awesome! Beautiful job on the horses! Now I have to start from the beginning and read all of this~ hmmm~
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:iconzombiesmile:
Zombiesmile Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Professional
Thanks Del. :3 I was thinking of re-sketching all the old ones and then uploading them all at once... 6 w9;
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:icondel-borovic:
Del-Borovic Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
I really like the lot of them! They all look really good. You pick awesome angles in your comic pages ;v; I'm always impressed! I'd be nice to see you work more on them, but I like how they are right now ;v; there's more, right?
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:iconzombiesmile:
Zombiesmile Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009  Professional
t-thank you! ; w;
Yes, there's more. (...someday. >____<; just need to sit down and draw it. )
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